Wednesday, April 26, 2017

Personal Eassay

1. What was one idea that the writer gave in the Wide Range of Topics section that you can use as you start deciding on a topic?

 Make sure your writing about something you strongly care about.


2. What was one idea the writer gave in the Opinions Pieces section that you should remember as you are writing your piece?

 Include details toward the topic and be specific on what it it means to the writer.

3. List three suggestions the writer makes in the Personal Essays and Crafts section that you will use as you write.

Make connections with bringing the subject closer and have for detail. Take ideas and have reaction to certain things discussed. The reader should get a idea of why the writer feels a certain way.



It’s unfair that in many countries today they allow boys to get an education and girls not to get an opportunity to learn. One country right now that’s going through this is Pakistan.  It is in the top ten for females not getting the right that they deserve.

I think that most people today don’t realize how important an education is and aren’t grateful for the education they are getting.  Kids my age often complain about how hard school is or it’s so stupid on some subjects or how they are taught. Even though schoolwork gets harder and harder. Moving up to the next grade level teaching and preparing us for getting a job and preparing for our future.

If I had not been adopted and was still in the orphanage in China in my home town, odds are that I would not have been able to go to school past elementary.  I would either be working in the orphanage or a factory. The part in China where I was born is very rural and poor and culturally males may be valued more than girls so get to keep going to school when girls don’t.

There is a fund right now that’s based upon Malala Yousafzai who was born in Pakistan. She took a stand for what she believed in toward noticing that education is being limited for her and much less all female children as well.  Because of using her voice, word got out that a 15 year girl wasn’t afraid of what she believed in. She was shot by the Taliban because she was going to school

There are many countries where girls have limited chances for an education or only an elementary level education.  In Somalia, 95% of girls age 7-16 have never been to school.  Other countries who have the highest rate for girls not going to school include Niger, Liberia, Mali, Burkina, Faso, Guinea, Pakistan, Yemen, Benin and Cote d’Ivoire and Nigeria.  They all have over 50% or more where the girls 7-16 don’t go to school.

Many reasons why girls have been not able to go to school is based upon the fact of not having enough money, violence at school, child marriage and the fact that their role in the household is either help with preparing food or taking care of siblings.

Parents may not want girls to go to school because they may be protecting girls from the violence at school or on the way to school.  Parents may not be able to afford to send their children to go to school and if they can only afford one they send the boy. The Taliban and groups like Boko Haram do not believe girls should receive an education.

“According to the World Bank, the return on one year of secondary education for a girl correlates with a high 25% wages later in life.” (GlobalPartnership.org)  An education for girls helps their future generations and helps take them out of poverty.  Evidence shows that women invest their money back into their family and communities.

Being able to get a higher education means there are less likely to get married, as a child bride.  This means they won’t have as many children over their lifetime so this controls the population.  It also means they aren’t as likely to die in childbirth which happens more to child brides

I feel lucky to be receiving a good education and wish that girls all around the world had this opportunity.






Thursday, April 20, 2017

Opinions Writing Preview

Immigration laws getting out of hand
1. Who wrote the story?
Editorial

2. What is their story about?
About how immigration laws are going way to far.

3. What is their direct opinion about that topic? Please quote it directly from the story or do a really good job of paraphrasing. Trumps support toward immigration is making immigrants feel unwelcomed and scared considering what the United States is.

4. Did they address what the other side might think about their topic?
  No.

5. Were they wishy-washy with their opinion? By this I mean did they every go back and say well maybe if this were to happen, then their opinion wouldn't be valid. Support your opinion.
 They never switched sides they kept going with the fact that immigrants are being treated unfairly.

6. Are there any quotes in the story?
 Yes.
7. What point of view did they write in (1st, 2nd or 3rd)?
Third person.


Betsy DeVos unfit to serve as U.s Secretary of Education


1. Who wrote the story?
Reagan Wallace
2. What is their story about?
U.s secretary and how she is running the education system.
3. What is their direct opinion about that topic? Please quote it directly from the story or do a really good job of paraphrasing. "She is an influential woman, but she was given an opportunity to lead a sector of politics she is unqualified to lead".

4. Did they address what the other side might think about their topic?
No.
5. Were they wishy-washy with their opinion? By this I mean did they every go back and say well maybe if this were to happen, then their opinion wouldn't be valid. Support your opinion.
No just stated clearly she was not fit for the job.
6. Are there any quotes in the story?
No.
7. What point of view did they write in (1st, 2nd or 3rd)?
Third person.




Our Great Tree is Worth Saving 
1. Who wrote the story? 
     Ian Miller
2. What is their story about?
    Trying to encourage students to try and help save the tree that was awarded "The second best tree in Austin" and also that it provides shade.

3. What is their direct opinion about that topic? Please quote it directly from the story or do a really good job of paraphrasing. The writer thinks its worth saving "To see it go would be like seeing a peace of Bowie itself leave".

4. Did they address what the other side might think about their topic?
 He only said that it will cost a lot to try and make it go back to being healthy.
5. Were they wishy-washy with their opinion? By this I mean did they every go back and say well maybe if this were to happen, then their opinion wouldn't be valid. Support your opinion.
Nope just stated reasons why students should care.
6. Are there any quotes in the story?
No.
7. What point of view did they write in (1st, 2nd or 3rd)?
First person.

Going Above the Norm for College
1. Who wrote the story?
Jake Brien
2. What is their story about?
Giving the reader a view of what to expect to get into the college they want.
3. What is their direct opinion about that topic? Please quote it directly from the story or do a really good job of paraphrasing. "If you're not in the top ten percent, well you'll have to make a 1360 on the SAT, along with extracurricular like art to set yourself apart from the other fish in the sea looking to get accepted".

4. Did they address what the other side might think about their topic?
No they kept explaining the process.
5. Were they wishy-washy with their opinion? By this I mean did they every go back and say well maybe if this were to happen, then their opinion wouldn't be valid. Support your opinion.
No.
6. Are there any quotes in the story?
No.
7. What point of view did they write in (1st, 2nd or 3rd)?
Third person.



Importance of physics class

1. Who wrote the story?
Abby Ong

2. What is their story about?
Its about the writer wanting students to take physics.
3. What is their direct opinion about that topic? Please quote it directly from the story or do a really good job of paraphrasing. " Most colleges prefer applicants who have taken it, so taking it helps a student be more competitive".

4. Did they address what the other side might think about their topic?
Yes even thought students might not be interested they should still consider.
5. Were they wishy-washy with their opinion? By this I mean did they every go back and say well maybe if this were to happen, then their opinion wouldn't be valid. Support your opinion.
No its the same.
6. Are there any quotes in the story?
Yes.(dictionary)
7. What point of view did they write in (1st, 2nd or 3rd)?
Second person.


Finally, answer the following questions:

A. What do you think the major differences between a hard news story and an opinions piece? Come up with at least three.
  •  Facts are stated.
  • Editorials are the writers opinion or interpretation.
  • Hard news has who, what, when, why, how.

B. Why do you think there aren't very many photos on this page?
It's based on the writers opinion and they just want to be heard.
C. What are three topics you think would be good to write an opinions piece on?
  •  Trump
  •  Women's March
  • Gay Marriage

Peer Review SoM

http://camrynsphotojournalismblog.blogspot.com/2017/04/student-of-month-final-story.html

Paragraphs - 45
5 quotes - 35
Inverted pyramid - 20
Extra Credit? - 10 points punctuation
TOTAL = 100

Tuesday, April 18, 2017

Final Exam Preview Activity

1.) It gave pointers on how to cut or add in photos. Especially if you want to shorten or add seconds to the project. There has to be a theme.
The movie can include sound effects, vocieovers. Its I movie is not all about videos but you can shoot pictures. The timeline can  be longer or shorter depending how long the producer wants it 

2.) I already knew how to move clips in the timeline.

3.) I learned about  clip timer.

4.)  I'm concerned about if we have to work with vocieovers or somehow I'm going to lose the whole project.
5.)
    Somewhat confident that i will be able to gather it all together and  that it will be done early and be ready for use. 
6.)
    I would like to incorporate somehow pictures of a camp I go every summer too Rocky River Ranch as a story that's if i get permission to shoot there.This place is so significance to me since I have been going since I was seven and have been going ever since.

Monday, April 17, 2017

SLO Practice

1. C or D
2. A
3. C
4. D
5. B
6. C


Caption Writing 

Zach Johnson a personal body guard of Malala Yousafzai meets her fans while walking  across the aisle at the state  Capitol in Downtown Austin. She  meets up with the Governor Nathan Deal this afternoon  MondayApril,17,2017.

Tuesday, April 11, 2017

Nut Graf

makes the reader want to read the whole article.Its usually a paragraph or sentence.It explains "in the nut shell what the article  is about.And it doesn't give a whole lot of detail so the reader can keep reading.

In the beginning there needs to be a hook.The ending is never spoiled to the reader. Also includes why the reader should care.Plus its taking place in the beginning of the article. More than a sentence.

Sunday, April 9, 2017

Sports Portfolio Evaluation

1. Jason Mott

2. General focus  Black and White 

List three problems that the judges noted with the portfolio wish the eyes would stand out,something was in focus,cropping

4. List two things the judges like-  tells a story,creates mood

5. What is your overall impression of the photographer? What did you like or not like?
   I like how the the photos are really detailed and the fact that the photos are black and white creating a mood toward the viewer.



1.  Sam Adams

2. General focus  Bikes
 
3. List three problems that the judges noted with the portfolio wish the kids had action, too much of a tilt, wish there was a close up

4. List two things the judges like- Simple, has shadows
 
5. What is your overall impression of the photographer? What did you like or not like?
         I thought  the photographer that took the photos had a interesting eye. On some of the photos I dint like how some of them were too far away like when they had a mountain bike in the air they should have zoomed in a bit.


1. Carlos Delgado

2. General focus of portfolio  Paralyzed women

3. List three problems that the judges noted with the portfolio not interesting,RGB is off,not focused 

4. List two things the judges like- clouds are clear, there is action

5. What is your overall impression of the photographer? What did you like or not like?
    I thought the photos were ok  like the clouds and some I was not a fan like the picture of the skater boy and the sunset behind him the photographer should have made him do action then standing.


Dustin Snipes Winner

1. What did the judges note as strengths as they were critiquing it?
 Everybody is doing something,can see expression ,creative 


2. What do you see as strengths? Do you see any weaknesses?
    There was angles and cropping was really good, and close ups and the photos had story clearly stated. Some area might need help are lighting and maybe watch on the Photoshop with the baseball player throwing the ball at the batter.

3. Briefly describe the process the judges went through in deciding the winner.     
 Look at the portfolios ,delete worst pictures,critique the better ones,chose the best ones       




 Describe one photo that you agree with the judges on. Explain why you and the judges do or do not like it.  I agree with judges on the first photo with the subject in a sled and the camera on the edge and how whats makes this unique and also I don't like the fact that the camera is on its side.

Describe one photo that you do NOT agree with the judges on. Explain why you think the judges are wrong. The one with the soccer player jumping in the air I like it and I don't think its simple since she's showing emotion and the fact that she stands out.

Tuesday, April 4, 2017

Student of the Month Interview #2





1. How much effort  did it take you to get up this far to be ''Student of the month"?
 It took a lot of determination to get all my assignments done and hard work really paid off.

2. Do you consider yourself to be a role model for younger generations and friends ? why?
   I do consider myself to be a role model since sometimes I can relate to certain topics that are brought up.

3. Is there a certain expectation your teachers have of you versus family toward school work?
 Not really they just want whats best for me and for me to do my best.

4.  What stands  out from you as opposed to other students that go to school?
   I try and go the extra mile with extra credit, test corrections, signing up for fit especially when I have a test for that subject.

5. How do you balance a student life keeping up with grades and the real you when you have free
time? I work hard with  motivation and when I'm done I can have time to goof off or chill with my friends.


6.  Where do you see yourself when you graduate from high school and go forward with the future?
  I'm not sure where I see myself ,but right now I'm really into photography and the many opportunities I get to share with the viewer.


7. How late does it take you to do your homework and study?
It depends what I have for homework,subject,how tired I am.

8. What are some opportunities are you are waiting to happen at Bowie?
  Get better at photography and keep making friends.

9. Do you think this opportunity is worth the hard work you did?
 I think this is worth it since if I do find a good school , it would really look good on my application.

10. Depending on the core class is homework a struggle for you?
 Yes since Bio,Geo,Math are my worse subjects.

11. Based on the nominations should this reflect on how friends and family look at you?
  No since nothing about my personality changed and they know how hard I work with school work.

12. For students that do struggle with the amount of homework and have to be in a modified class what advice do you give the them?  If you want out of the class then try going the extra mile. Modified is set to your learning level if you want a challenge then go for it.


13. If during the school there was a nap/free time period besides lunch how would you use it?
 I would  sleep and maybe use some of that time to doodle or etc....

14.  What activities are you involved in at and outside of school?
  I'm involved in Track at Bowie.

15. Is their any change that  should be added or deleted from Bowie?
 Not that I know of.

16. What can students do to try overcome test anxiety and stress in general ?
  Eat a healthy breakfast, go to bed early, study, have a great attitude. 

17. Any tips for trying to survive the school days without trying to fall asleep or skipping class?
  Yawn really big so that oxygen goes to your brain, figit with something.

18. Is there a certain way you study and do homework if so what?
 For homework I listen to music in the background since I hate it when it quiet cause then it sounds like a funeral .And for studying I use repetition.

19. What motivates you during the day to do your best?
  Just to keep reminding myself that I'm challenging myself plus there is only four class periods a day.

20. Does the attendance effect your grades and the Eocs?
  It does affect me since I really need that incentive to try and help with the subject.




Who    Haley Johnson
What  Won Student of the Month Award
Where James Bowie High School
Why   Keeping up with grades and always ahead of the game
How    Her teacher told her and it was over the announcements

                                         Lead
Haley Johnson just moved from San Antonio and is already cracking at the books
and keeping up with her grades. Johnson recently was selected as being Student of the Month at
Bowie High School.

                                     Nut Graf

Bowie's first award for Student of the Month is a recent transfer to the high school illustrating that anyone can win this award .


                                        Body

Statement Creating good study habits has helped Johnson perform well since moving to Austin.
Quote     "I try and go the extra mile with extra credit, test corrections, and signing up for FIT, especially when I have a test for that subject", said Haley Johnson, Student of the Month.
Statement Like many of her fellow Bowie students, Johnson likes background music while studying.
Quote  "For homework I listen to music in the background since I hate it when it is quiet because then it sounds like a funeral", said Johnson.


End     As her fellow students learned about this award, they got to know more about Johnson which helped her make additional friends at her new school.

Learning How to Interview Part 1

Sources

  • Parents
  • Students
  • Teachers 
  1.  Why start now with the dress codes?
  2.  Why take away somebodies ability to show who they are on the outside and inside ?
  3.   How can you be sure that nobody will protest the new rule and add more drama?
  4.   What will the dress code be?
  5.  What were the steps to this code being made?
  6.  How long will this last?
  7.  How can you be sure that students wont get bullied even though they dress the same ?
  8.  When will this officially be a dress code for the school?
  9. Are you in favor of the uniforms ?
  10. Do you think this affects how people will see you?
  11. Do you think the uniforms will be comfortable? 
  12.  What does this have to do with learning ?
  13.  Will making this rule be helpful or worse?
  14.  How much does the school uniform cost?
  15.  How will the outfits between female and males differ?
  16.  What will the next grade level think?
  17.  Whats some advantages to this?
  18.   How did you express yourself?
  19.  Are you going to start a protest?
  20. Do you think this is right thing to do?

Sunday, April 2, 2017

Architecture prompt shoot

                                                                   Surroundings

  
Light 


  
                                                                  Pattern

                                                        Angle and Shape  



                                                                  Detail